Lipstick Kisses and Wordiness

I have random pieces of paper with lipstick kisses scattered wherever I frequent. There are lipstick kisses on the back of envelopes and napkins in the console of my car. My dresser has a few receipts painted with my lip impressions. Toilet paper sheets with my pucker stamp lie amongst the junk and waste in my garbage can.

How does lipstick kisses relate to writing? I’m not sure I would have connected the two myself if it wasn’t for a comment made by a friend the other day.

“I like you without eye shadow,” says friend.

“I like eye shadow. I like make-up,” says me.

The words left my mouth and then it hit me. Editing your work is like kissing an envelope. You need to get rid of the excess in order to look your best.
I tend to overwrite. I love to overwrite. But, I am aware that to become the best writer that I can be, I need to smudge out some of the words that flood my paper. If I don’t blot out the wordiness I risk looking like I tried too hard or not hard enough.

Can wordiness be the kiss of death? Do you have editing tips that you would like to share?


Filed under books, constructing, contests, creating, editing, emotions, Fiction, middle grade fiction, routine, Uncategorized, WISHES, writers, writing, Writing

3 responses to “Lipstick Kisses and Wordiness

  1. Once you’ve written your piece, let it settle. Come back with a fresh eye, read it out loud and you’ll see plenty of worthwhile adjustments to make.

  2. Maribeth

    Great advice Roz. I always find mistakes after I let my work sit.
    Reading your work out loud gives you a good idea of how it flows.

  3. Thanks for visiting Book Dreaming and participating in my contest. I love meeting new bloggers! Good luck.

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